Mourning

Ten Word Challenge entry using: nursery, dwells, while, voice, grief, guide, loss, far, infancy, emerge nursery

 

Mourning   A nursery of emotions  emerge from infancy  when grief and loss  converge to wade in pools of misery. Some say there dwells a spirit guide within, a caring voice that speaks great truth, “Begin--- Each step we take’s a conscious choice.” Not far from darkest night’s own view lies morn; while life moves on, a heavy heart’s reborn. Life’s darkest right before the dawn. By Sharon Miller Bolander   © 2008 Peggy Paris (All rights reserved)

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I went back and read this poem again and feel more strongly its power, well chosen images and words. You are a very talented poet. I'm honored to read your work.

Sal

[Suelou]

A very beautiful, but sad poem. Very touching!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations on your second-place contest win! I love your poem.

Sal

[Tony Hwilka]

I thought your poem was such a beautiful write. Congratulations on winning the contest. Tony ps Oh just a suggestion in the poem Begin each step we take's a conscious. a typo (take, is) again such a beautiful and well written poem.

[Helena]

So beautifully poignant and touching that it Left me in awe of the
sheer talent and loveliness of your pen. Well done for Tovli's
10 words contest!

Helena

[Tovli]

a beautiful poem; moving and profound. excellent job. tovli

[Laura E. Aranda]

Wow, congratulations! Good luck in the Tovli contest! Cheers, lea