Voyeur

Will you meet me tonight,

late, at your window?

I need to see you

like a stargazer

sees the skies.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

...it reads like moonlight...beautiful brevity!

[Poet]

Thanks Kelly.

[Ardra]

So simple yet so adorable and sweet..... how just a glimpse of the one you love can keep you satisfied...

loved the below lines

I need to see you,
like a stargazer
sees the skies.

i can relate it , the one who cannot be reached or you cant have you still like to see them.... their existence means so much to you.. thanks for sharing the beautiful creation..

[Poet]

Thanks for a great interpretation.

[Woody]

sweet piece. the poet is content to just watch from afar just like a stargazer. good comparison.

nice one, Rain.

[Poet]

Thank you Woody.

[Lyn Anderson]

A beautiful piece, filled with longing -- shades of missing someone who has passed, or perhaps just someone the speaker cannot attain, like the stars ...

[Poet]

Thank you for your interpretation.

[barleygirl]

Your illusive message could pertain to humans longing in the flesh . . . but the remarkable part is that it can also describe a longing for someone (or a pet) that's departed this earthly realm, since we often stand at the window to the hereafter with longing. Another idea sparked is standing at the window of someone we can't reach for some reason . . . so many meanings in your simple words.

[Poet]

Thank you for an interesting review.

[Chris]

THAT was a niiiiccce flow to listen to... softly.

[B]

Sweet

so romantic .....................

[Tales Of A Dreamer]

Seems rather subliminal, but it still is romantic.

[RomaJ]

Terrifying but eloquently done.100...:)

[Poet]

Thank you.

[RomaJ]

You're welcome