Voyeur

Will you meet me tonight,

late, at your window?

I need to see you

like a stargazer

sees the skies.

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Romeo and Juliet came to mind first, but then the gazing at the stars to give you focus on the love that is in your heart, but not with you at that moment. It has a true love feel to it. Thank you for sharing.

[Poet]

Thanks very much for the review Willard.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

cute poem, has the essence it need...we all like to be stargazers. Glad you shared this. :) Rudi

[Poet]

Thanks for reading Rudi.

[Zahra]

Cute and simple.
I need to see you
to watch you
like a stargazer
watches the skies

[Poet]

Thanks very much for reading Zahra.

[Zahra]

you're welcome. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Meet me tonight
late
at your window.

I need to see you
to watch you
like a stargazer
watches the skies"

[Poet]

Yup, pretty much. :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)....................

[Lizardo]

Its simple but the message is beautiful
Great poetry

[Poet]

Thank you for taking a look Lizardo.

[Lizardo]

You are welcome

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Simple, elegant and complex this packs so much desire and passion in to a few lines

[Poet]

That's what I was hoping for. Thanks so much for the review.

[Alfred Kukitz]

For a small piece very powerful!

[Poet]

Thanks very much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the second stanza....if you can find it, listen to the song by New Colony Six, "Can't you see my cry"
this reminds me a bit of that...

very romantic piece.

[Poet]

Thanks Jacob, I'll look for it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i just checked, Tim---you tube has it...

[Poet]

haha, listening to it now. Old but a good song. I can see what you mean. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

:)
yes, old like me...from the sixties....

[Poet]

The sixties had some great music. The classics four was a group I like a lot. Or were they in the seventies?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very end of the sixties...good group yes, "Spooky" "Stormy" "Traces of Love"

good stuff, bluesy...

[Poet]

Spooky and stormy are basically the same song. Love them both.

[DIVYA]

You are such a truly romantic writer. Amazing and the best writing for me today.

[Poet]

Thank you very much DIVYA.

[Lydia Shutter]

Short and sweet...and ultra romantic. Any poem with celestial references is right up my alley. Lydi**

[Poet]

Thank you Lydi. :)