The wildflowers and you.

The purple violets in your hair bloom for all the days

you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.

Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.

Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.

Reviews

[DIVYA]

The poem spoke to me of the incomparable beauty that resides in an ardent lover's eyes. Very romantic and beautiful poetry. Much appreciated...

[Lighthouse]

I appreciate your comment, thank you.

[Pryde Foltz]

I can't pick a favourite for all three were equally lovely …. but the taunting playfulness of the last one brought the piece home with aplomb …. she says in a whisper:)

[Lighthouse]

Thank you Pryde.

[Lydia Shutter]

Gloriously romantic. You have entwined nature with the feelings of romance....and the creation is so lovely! Lydi**

[Lighthouse]

Thanks Lydia.

[Sheila Kline]

You have written many poems Tim, but this has to be among the most beautiful and romantic of them!! Your words are enough to make any gal swoon with stardust in her eyes!

[Lighthouse]

Thank you Sheila.

[Samuel Dickens]

Highly romantic. I think I can smell love in that field and hear whispers of sweet nothings.

[Lighthouse]

Thanks very much Sam.

[Rene Salinas]

To me this is like speaking in a different language. I can read the words and understand the meaning in fact when I finished I went. Awww that's so romantic! A rare moment of nebulous fragility in me trying to appeal to my non exsistent sensitive nature. Is just I am so far removed from this way of expressing that I can only admire those who can. This is like getting in touch with a feeling, then behold it and then write about it.

Great clarity

Thankyou

[Lighthouse]

Thanks for the review. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

The heart flutters at such sweetness, Tim - this is truly beautiful.

[Lighthouse]

Thank you very much Rita.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Ana said it best...nothing i can add...this is insanely romantic....i wish i had written this poem...i can't do this.

[Lighthouse]

I'm flawed, thank you Jacob very much.

[Matching Socks]

I'm a tad speechless, this is so incredibly romantic.
A very beautiful poem.

[Lighthouse]

Thank you Ana.