The wildflowers and you.

The purple violets in your hair bloom for all the days

you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.

Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.

Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

oh my dear friend, this one is enchanting with its whispered words of enticement.. so inviting and beautiful.. the tender tone and layers of affection are palpable and captivating... I love the alliteration, the phrasing, the simplicity and sweet emotion.. you already know I am a huge fan, and this is exactly why.. awesome Tim.. this one melts hearts and makes the reader want to come and tell you anything:)

[Lighthouse]

They always can if they wish. Thank you April, you're always so kind.

[AprilRN1210]

it is always a pleasure, Tim.. you are more than welcome :)

[Lighthouse]

A big kiss to you. Smooooooooooch. :)

[AprilRN1210]

that one of those big, loud, wet, sloppy kisses?..

[Lighthouse]

Somewhere between that and a soft one. Gentle but persuasive you might say.

[AprilRN1210]

well, alrighty then!.. sounds like a treat I am more than happy to treasure :)

[Lighthouse]

...........:).............

[AprilRN1210]

*happy dance*... makes me giggle thinking back to those stick figures you tried to help me learn to use.. you remember?.. lol

[Lighthouse]

Do I? It sounds familiar?

[Lighthouse]

My last message didn't go through. Stick figures? Hmm, sounds familiar?

[AprilRN1210]

hey hey mister!... ummmm, yea you should!... sent me links and tons of those little guys duuuh!.. read morehey hey mister!... ummmm, yea you should!... sent me links and tons of those little guys duuuh!..
fine, I see how it is.. nothing left to do but pick up the pieces of my shattered ego and go pout :(

[AprilRN1210]

hey it ate my words.. ha!.. my luck..

what I said was.. guess nothing else left to do but pick up pieces of shattered ego and go pout.. lol of course WC would eat that!... grrrrrrr

[Lighthouse]

haha, I can't remember, hahahahaha It'll come to me later I'm sure, Links....stick figures...it'll come to me...

[AprilRN1210]

on AP... the little guy in shower, the sunglasses dude, the dancing one.. oh my gawd Tim!!! seriously.. I know it has been a while but jeez!... you used to make me giggle with those little guys..

[Lighthouse]

I've noticed its been eating words lately. Screwed up site. It hasn't frozen up as much though I've noticed.

[AprilRN1210]

yea, likes eating my words.. thinks I talk to much probably.. :)

[AprilRN1210]

*too*..... ate my "o".. not nice!

[Lighthouse]

OOOOOOOOHHHHHH, AP, yeah I remember that. I was thinking of this site. haha They cold use those little guys here. It would be better than :) or :D

[Lighthouse]

It ate my "u" in could. :)

[AprilRN1210]

lol... I see that... :P
and NOW you remember!.. pfffft..

[Awakened Rose]

Wow. This was so beautiful. So delicate, so demanding, so enchanting! Love this piece, thank you for sharing!

[Lighthouse]

Thank you for the nice review.

[Marie]

Your lovely poetry keeps popping up, and I am lucky enough to find it. I have read it with pleasure for two years.

[Lighthouse]

You're a wonderful woman Marie, thank you.

[Girl With A Pen]

Wonderful! I was drawn in from the first stanza. :)

[Lighthouse]

Thank you, I appreciate your thoughts.

[Megan]

I love this. Those eyes draw me in. Beautiful words.

[Lighthouse]

Thanks very much.

[Laura Lynn]

I know what you mean, you worship this goddess woman lady girl and everything about her seems as the natural world, I have never seen a flower bloom in a person's hair after it is picked but the idea is magical way of thinking...I love cat-tails also!

[Lighthouse]

thank you for the review.

[MzC]

A provocative invitation...nicely crafted! (fab photo too!) :)

[Lighthouse]

Thank you Mz.