Star in the Sky

For the longest time

i saw stars in the sky

bleeding bright lights, 

wounded by isolation,

stolen by space,

and foolishly thought

it was only me

trapped in darkness.

Reviews

[Amy R]

Always have company even if cannot be seen. The sky always had me pondering the slightest thought.
Thanks for sharing...
~Amy

[Lighthouse]

Thank you Amy.

[Chris Shaw]

What a wonderful way of looking at that star. A different perspective. Meaningful poetry.

Chris

[Lighthouse]

Thank you.

[Buddhistboy73]

A wise poem about the loneliness of human existence here....

We're not alone, as they say....

Thanks for sharing this thought-provoking write...:)

BB73

[Lighthouse]

Thanks for your comment, Buddhistboy73.

[JessyJacob]

Very tight erection poet ji..

[red93]

I liked this, and once again we see how brevity adds weight to the message. I liked the illustration as well ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Lighthouse]

Thanks very much Red. I appreciate the read and comment.

[emmajoygreen]

Superb truth, offered as a poem - re-creating a weeping myth.

[Lighthouse]

TY for your comment emma.

[emmajoygreen]

You're welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Even with the company of all those other stars, we can be quite lonely.
Thank you for this poem...it put me in a mood of understanding this feeling.
j.

[Lighthouse]

TY for your comment.