For Aamir Ali,

A Poem by Cafeland Khamoshiyan

I created a fan page,

you got 102 followers.

I made a sketch of yours,

you didn't like it.

I tweeted you for like hundred times,

Do you know that someone wants a retweet.

© 2015 Cafeland Khamoshiyan

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Kelsey Schadt

Just an idea--What if you reformatted like this:

I created a fan page,
you got 102 followers.

I made a sketch of yours,
you didn’t like it.

I tweeted you for like hundred times,
Do you know that someone wants a retweet.

I think it creates a more visual effect of how you put yourself out there as a fan, and then highlights how he has ignored you