Poems by a People-Watcher: Reflections

Have you ever seen
the many diffrent people
One person has been

The diffrent faces that are shown,
All of these I have known

The actions expected
Rehersed and revised
Perfected.
To hide
what is truely despised

These are not my own
but what i have perceived

i am a watcher
a spectator to this scene

for the reflections in faces
tell me what I
need to be.

Author's Note

Any advice will be greatly appreciated

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Very solemn and very profound! "Perceived" not "preceved" (unless you were going for another word I'm not familiar with). I'd also suggest some more experimentation with punctuation, for the musicality of this doesn't quite know what it's doing in certain places. But the imagery is great, and the poem itself is thought-provoking enough to have substantial potential. Great start!

[Elizabeth]

Thank you very much, I fixed "perceived", English is not my first language. I will work on my punctuation aswell