Messy Closet

Messy Closet

A Story by Denise Sloan
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Cleaning Mind

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 Have you ever felt like things not making sense  in your life, well I have. It mines me of a messY closet, because  you keep  hold on things  and you don't let them go like feelings  and other things. It is hard for us to let go of things. We get attached to things so much!! It so hard for me to clean out my closet ,but it hard  for me to throw anything out. I opened   my closet door and looked  in and I can't believe  how could  I let my closet get this messy. I had put off for months and months from cleaning  my closet. I stood there looking  at the  boxes, clothes, stuff toys. How could I let this closet go un clean for months. So, I dived in a started working on task  in hand. It took me  three days to finish my task, but I still wasn't  done. There was more to be done in the closet, I removed the things from vlodry, but I didn't throw away anything . I just moved everything  out of my closet to my bed, which I didn't  do anything but remove mess to the bed from closet. So really  I didn't  do nothing, but make bigger mess. So what am saying I should have sat down and though threw for going   into closet without plain  So I always think of my mind is being mess!!

© 2016 Denise Sloan


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Nice metaphor. There is truth in what you say about our attachments.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I LOVED it. Joyful and fun and speaking your mind. Really nice flow.
I felt like a boy skipping through a meadow!
Thank you :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Denise Sloan
Denise Sloan

Pittsburgh, PA



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My name is Denise Renee Sloan, and I am 56 years old, and I enjoy writing. I love write romance stories. I joy cooking, watching TV, and listening to movies and music. I also enjoy working on the co.. more..