What Am I Thinking

The emptiness asked me this in cold words ,"What am I thinking??"

Well, I am thinking about poetry, guitar, art, creativity, laughter, purpose in all things, Faithfulness..the cost within for the sake of my own self, Living denied from the breath of life and godless  in my greatest adventures. Never fearing an experience that scares the crap out of me. Never fearing because It will nourish and bloom a beautiful rarity within. The one true currency I was born to spend.

 I am thinking how important it is to learn to love and what it is to be loved, It is the hardest and most rewarding lesson we will ever have and share in this lifetime. What am I thinking? What in the death of this moment and life am I thinking? 

I don't know yet but I thought that to learn well and then to be willing to give back is as noble an aspect as can ever fill the emptiness of our souls. Namaste~

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

"I am thinking how important it is to learn to love and what it is to be loved, It is the hardest and most rewarding lesson we will ever have and share in this lifetime." The cold, hard truth of the world. Another great work. I quite like your style of writing.

[Perdition]

And for that statement Luna.. hugs galore! It is an impossible lesson without miles of strength and we have become so delusional in our gift of love. Thanks again!

[Brittany Zedalis]

You're welcome ^-^

[Renée]

A thinking piece..and it expresses exactly how it feels, to be a poet. Our minds are constantly going with each stimulation,even a leaf blowing by in the wind... Yet, for me.. as soon as someone says that dreaded question " what are you thinking" my mind goes blank to answer. The door shuts as if I am keeping a secret from them, or may be self preservation. I really enjoyed this piece, it make my mind whirl..Great Job!

[Perdition]

I think you just described what it is to be the poet quite well. I need to reposition a few things in this one but I thought at the time the point was too important to wait..and then the leaf arrived with the prevailing wind. Thanks!

[Renée]

my pleasure

[FREE_BIRD]

nice feeling and realistic

[Perdition]

Thanks~ Your words are very well sculpted and I would one to expound but my truth is not for sale and my heart unfortunately is a hopeless tool at the mercy of bleeding pen~ SO a glass of Bourbon just ought-a be the right amount of oil..lol..JK~

[FREE_BIRD]

lol.....nice that i m the way of your laugh

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

Your work is always thought provoking... this piece addresses some very important questions that warrant further comtemplation.

Change is necessary in order to move forward, on all levels.

Catch up soon,

Alisa ;-)

[Ink Seductress]

Wow, i felt that you read this poem to me. Not as in I can heard your voice but every nuance in the tone of this poem, pulled me in, It was as if i couldn't stop reading once i started. This was beautiful. :)

[Perdition]

And so are you..Thanks Niyia I really needed this poem to touch someone and I am very grateful you heard it and listened, Namaste :p

[Priscilla Sayers]

As the winds blow the beauty of your voice reaches volumes as the Hawk flies into dreams spoken with great passion. As always I loveth your words, your thoughts, your soul. You are beyond exceptional! You A Bad Mamma Jamma! 😘😘😘
Love Canvas!