rise

in times of darkness....

At first, it may seem hopeless.

But when you are ardent,

Nothing can get in the way of your victory.

Don’t doubt at yourself

If you’re tenacious

The sky isn't the limit for you

 

Things may go wrong, as they will

Don't lose your confidence,

Believe that you have victory running in your veins.

 

If there is a way, there is going to be flames

Well, you’re bound to get burnt

But be fearless because these burns will enlighten you.

 

People may abandon you, thinking you’re crazy

But once you reach the finish line,

You will feel the glory of success

 

Don’t let fear take you down.

These scars will haunt you

But to learn from it is the lesson.

Be the flames to the fire,

Waves to the ocean, storm to the wind.

Because one day, you will look back and cherish.

 

When it’s too cold, don’t look or a companion.

Though the storm may rage on,

Be strong and fight until it plays out.

 

Run till you feet can run no more,

Sing till your lungs can take no more

You never know when the sun comes up and it’s too late.

The fire is perilous

But once you learn to conquer the blaze

You can rise like a Phoenix.

-alfred

Author's Note

This poem got me an award at the SGI GULF

Reviews

[duff]

Such a powerful and inspiring delivery in your words. Optimism and positive vibes are always needed and this can do that for someone down and out who needs a lift. Sometimes we need to feel pain to feel alive and to break through barriers. Well done. I'll definitely be back!

[ALFRED]

You just made my day! thank you for your awesome review!

[HBN]

No words, just the most perfect and poetic way of motivating someone, that failures are not the end of the world and that working towards correcting those mistakes will make you love yourself more. Great Stuff!!!!

[ALFRED]

thank you for the review!