Cant Stand It

i cant take it!!

i cant remember when it was peaceful

no fighting

no screaming

no one treating me like s**t

I CANT STAND IT ANYMORE!!!!!

I CANT F****ING STAND IT!!!!

i wont to leave

but go were?!?!

ITS ALL WRONG!!!

i cant remember a day when we all got along

no fights, no screams of anger

I WONT OUT!!!!

its fare!!!!

i cant keap living this way!!

its driving me insane!!

ITS KILLING ME!!!!

 

Aileen Maltese 4/30/08

Author's Note

srry if th spelling sucks

Reviews

[Kyle]

this poem is really powerful, i think that your language
choices really added to the pain felt through this poem.
your writing draws the viewer into this hostile world
which is being portraied. great job, this is a real
improvement when it comes to releasing your innermost
feelings. keep on writing, and thanks for sharing.