I feel you there

 

I feel your touch

So soft

So tender

So loving

I don’t wont to leave this moment

But we both know it wont last forever

 

I look into your eyes

You look into mine

Your eyes full of tears

As you hold me

So much left unsaid

Not enough time,

To say it all

 

As I hold my last breathe

As you plead to god

To let me stay

As fight to live

 

You kiss my lips

While the tears roll down your face

As I feel my life slipping away

 

You cradle my head,

You look into my eyes,

And tenderly kiss my lips

You tell me that you love me

As i said the same to you

As my eyes close

 

8/22/08

Reviews

[Lexy]

I don't think a poem has EVER affected me this way. I read it, and all of a sudden I couldn't breathe. Damn, this is so good. Oh, my God, this is so good. I can only make one suggestion: please change "enof" to "enough"