Sperm of a Fool

The wise man and the fool man in doing things; who is the wiser and successful than the other?

The sperm of a fool

Comes out

In slow waves of pleasure

And plants itself in rich soil

But a wise man’s

Comes out in haste

Plants itself in rocky soil

Who will reap the healthiest crops at last?

 

Author's Note

I cannot call this a poem; but a creative piece of writing. however, your recommendations and comments are heartily welcomed!

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

yup...its a great write...living for others is the best way to live...its a wonderful write...keep writing...

[petah]

Yeah, glitch. thanks for the motivation. don't let go off the pen too. kindly click on this link to see a fraction of my writings; http://ngilavetelo.blogspot.com/

[ANTO]

You've turned this on its head Petah and now I can't decide whose will flourish, its more about the ground than the sperm I think.
Provocative piece of writing.