High of life

High of life

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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A short poem.

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In the green, we are free,
highest as we can be,
in a haunted house,
where only lived a mouse.

In a night of dreams,
Where everything can be what it seems,
Mysteries unseen, friends and kin.
And we can be what we have always been.

Flying high, living fast,
Tripping at last, having a blast,
We carry on, life is short,
And from here we go forth.



© 2025 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
Thank you for reading my work.
All reviews are appreciated.

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As a reader, this is quite bittersweet.

Imaginative and a clever use of rhyming.

A passionate flow is also maintained throughout.

I think this has been an uplifting, joyous and relaxing piece. I like it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much, for your review.
I am glad you took the time to read my work. And very hap.. read more
Nice write, your poem evokes a sense of nostalgia as it reflects on identity and the importance of familial and friendly connections..
~Amy

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

2 Months Ago

Yes. I agree.
Thank you so much for your review.
Your words are deeply appreciated, de.. read more
Amy R

2 Months Ago

You're welcome, not a problem, I read when I can. 😊

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Added on December 21, 2025
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The_Ancient_Rock
The_Ancient_Rock

Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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