~Remembrance~

A poem reflecting the emotional scars striping my heart, made by a reckless soul.

~Remembrance~

The demon of remembrance does dwell and bask

In this bloody heart’s fountain, filling its flask

Stashing memories to spike the next breath

Stirring the bile to cut mercy’s breadth

Blurring lines; forgetting forgets

Chasing after; tangled in nets

One, storming the calm

Retreats to her palm

The demon’s fist

Her Judas kiss

Exorcise

Battle

Lies

Reviews

[Hanhil]

Beautiful...and I am afraid I cannot expect anything less from you now, my friend. The poem left to my interpretation brings out past memories, hurtful painful ones that though I tell myself I've let go still haunts me deep inside..'Stashing memories to spike the nest breath'..yet I will still keep moving forward 'Exorcise Battle Lies'

[gcp]

I like the form of this - dropping down

forgetting forgets is a good phrase too - flows well to nets :)

[Chrys_Pap]

excellent!! i love the way it fades to just "lies" in the end!

[Petrichor]

Thanx.... this is a poem about extreme sadness and fighting to let go of the pain/remembrance.... the "lies" were the main component to the painful remembrance. I truly appreciate the review!