Rebirth

A traditional haiku.

When dreams fall apart,

When snowstorms block the road ahead,

Rebirth soon ensues.

Author's Note

For the first time, I think I've managed to write a decent haiku.
Anyways, be honest!
Thank you.

Reviews

[Michael Soul]

cool

[Falling Leaf.]

Beautiful, Tom! Although I would call this more a senryu than a haiku--since haiku is strictly about nature-- it's still amazing all the same. Marvelously penned!

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Thank you very much. :)

[Falling Leaf.]

No trouble at all :)

[Cosmic kid]

Very beautiful.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Well thank you, my lady! XD

[Pax]

good, nice job on the haiku.

[devon]

You're right, I don't really know what to say because it's short, other than that it's well written (as always!) and that in such few words, you've managed to make something beautiful. :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

A wonderful write! I find this inspiring, never ending with despair always recognizing the promise that’s there. Wonderful just wonderful!

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

This isn't the first time :P I loved it, it was open yet subtle. Excellent write. :)

[Abbie]

Good Haiku. I like it! Keep it up Tom! :D