Sunrise Phenomenon

Sunrise Phenomenon

A Poem by Tomislav Petricevic

The Sun burns

Echoes of yesterday's

Deceitful grace,

Blinding the sight

Of feeble eyes,

Casting them away

Into the lies

Of promised remembrance.

© 2012 Tomislav Petricevic


Author's Note

Tomislav Petricevic
This is one of my "status poems" - freestyle poems I scribble down as a status on my Facebook wall.

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A great one for a status poem! Carry on this way and you will shine:-):-):-D.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomislav Petricevic

13 Years Ago

Thanks! :3
Interesting. I quite like it. Not much to say 'cause there's nothing to fix :)

Keep doing what you're doing,
Savannah

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomislav Petricevic

13 Years Ago

Thanks!

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Added on September 4, 2012
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Tomislav Petricevic
Tomislav Petricevic

Slavonski Brod, Slavonija, Croatia



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