Essence

Though I'd give it a shot with a haiku. WARNING! I suck.

Life and death,

an unbreakable connection,

the essence of world.

Author's Note

This just popped into my mind while studying, so i said: "I'mma write it down."

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

That's actually a lot more profound than it seems on the surface. The "essence of world"--that one line cannot be overlooked. It's a lot deeper and requires more than a cursory glance. I don't know anything about the haiku formula for poems, but even so, this is still really good. An unbreakable connection--that sums up life and death very well.

[Suditi]

True that.
Simple, elegant, powerful.

[Sweets]

So much meanings lie behind those three lines =)
very nice work !

[R.A. Youngblood]

Kratak poem, ali prekrasan! Svaka čast (;

[Angelic Surrender]

I agree. This is very profound. It's funny how so few words can mean so much.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

Wonderful, just what I would have hoped it would convey.

[jennifer little]

good and short keep up the good work

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

This is very good, simple and with great meaning and truth. Great haiku :)

[Regrets]

short and simple like a haiku is but still very deep. Really liked it.

P.S. you do not suck :)

[Aka_Kitsune]

quick and interesting :) i like it a lot!