The Greatest Struggle

Another haiku incoming, this time morale-inspired one.

Angelic morale,

A triumph over darkness' grasp;

They cannot break us.

Reviews

[Aravind]

"darkness' grasp" do you need an s after the apostrophe? I am not very sure on that... (i think you don't)

Anyways, an amazing work. I had a little trouble with the word "triumph" didn't understand it first, but I think I got it after a second look.

Good job, and keep writing.

[She of Three Personalit..]

Yes! I love the deeper meaning this poem gives me!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Again, perfectly simple.

[Katie Flores]

the power of the last line, i feel, ties together the haiku. the line in the sand, but etched in stone instead. It give something more than hope, it gives resolution.

[Kaylor Mason]

Very true--that one hope can inspire everything that's ever been written in this world. :) [I like how you used "darkness' grasp"; that's proper English. A lot of readers of our times have forgotten proper grammar.]

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very good write! Your haiku's are awesome

[Rosallia]

Haiku, nice =) I really like this one. I personally find it hard to get very emotional with this form of writing, but you've done a wonderful job

[Angelic Surrender]

Deep :)

[Desmund Tiny]

it reminds me a quotation
" a small light can tear the wide darkness"
I love it.... =D