Look

This poem represents how we're all looking for something in this world<3

He is a tainted angel
looking for help
from someone
who can free him
from Satan's grasp
so he can return to Heaven.

He is a star
looking for a light
hoping some day
to walk on the world below
but still bring joy
to everyone around him.

He is a flower
looking for a friend
to help him
bring life
and to spread joy
among people all around.

He is a boy
looking for love
from a young girl
who can help him
learn happiness
and for him to spend
eternity with

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[Rose of Gondor]

Who is he?
:) Sorry. That was kind of a dumb question. But I like the depth you put into the poem, and yes, I would've easily let the writing tell your age had I not read you "About Me" first. :) love the last paragraph and love the tainted angel part. Altogether wonderful, and since I myself is not a "rhyming poet", I have nothing to say on the subject of rhyming. :)