Death

Death is something that highly intrigues me and it's mysterious. I'm not really afraid of it. A lot of people though are afraid of death, but this is how I see "death"

As an icy cold gaze staring
the misty haze gathers all around.
Ever so silent is the air,
as your slow heartbeat making the only sound.

As coming forth ever so slow...
Your moments flow back here
and with this there is an eerie glow,
now there is no fear.

Yet closer as he comes
an aura can now be seen.
Now under a spell you've become.
the bone-like hand reaching out upon you.

The beating slowly coming to stop,
as your eyes go to close...
With his image beginning to fade,
as he has come and taken you away.

Reviews

[~FALL3N-ANG3L~]

Hm... This is pretty interesting to see how your view of death is. Its pretty good honestly, an it makes you really think bout death. Excellent job hun.

[Devan]

I am interested in death, not the people dying kind of way. It's more about rather what happens during the time we pass, or about what's after death.

[~FALL3N-ANG3L~]

I've thought bout that a lot recently to be honest. An I've discovered, I don't want to know. I want to have the surprise, like seeing something you always wanted brand new. A complete shock. Either its amazing or disappointing.

[Devan]

I usually stop once I think too much. I tend up getting depressed if I put way too much thought into it, but I know what you mean completely.

[~FALL3N-ANG3L~]

I know what you mean bout getting depressed, I'm depressed easily. That's why I don't wanna know, I'll face it when I get there.