Simplicity

This is a poem I wrote when i was out in the rain of course

The grey clouded skies above.
I stand out here as I watch,
the rain pour down.
So soft and gentle.
Is it cleansing itself from the evil,
and the hatred in the world?

Nature cleanses itself so easy,
but why can't I?

It's so simple...
yet it holds more beauty,
than those of a flower.
It's so peaceful out.

Why can't it rain more?
So we can escape the chaos of our lives
and stay in the never ending dream.

Reviews

[Soul Fire]

Wow.....I am speechless....So Beauitful...

[Amie Rose]

I found this really beautiful...

[Devan]

I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^