Fallen Angel

This is simply an angel from heaven whose falling and lost her grace.

Heavens up above the sky, all around the world so high.
Please, forgive what I've done, as I fall past the sun.
Graceful in the past, no surprise it didn't last.
My feathers slip and fade, as if I'm passing away.

Do not pity me, for this isn't to see.
Faster and faster I go, as me, an angel falls so low.

Reviews

[~FALL3N-ANG3L~]

Short but, a good meaning. I like it, an would like to see you add to it one day.

[Devan]

It is one of my favorites I have done, and yeah it is short >< I'm still trying to figure out how to finish/go on with this :c

[~FALL3N-ANG3L~]

Well just let it come to you, an I'm sure it'll be great. ^^