Rose

A poem for The Phantom

Hush Angel, for just this hour

and sink into my outstreched petals.

Red, of course, My Farthest Star

The color of each breath we take

Rest, My Love. Let this night pass,

may my soft tears fade your scars.

Thorns of mortals mar your wings, 

but our music waits in cool night breezes.

Sing, Brave One, and let me burn

with the searing ring of every note. 

Your rumbling voice within my ear

sends ice along my lower spine. 

Kiss, oh Shadow, kiss the strings

of your songbird's midnight reverie

whose heaven lives in your arms alone

as we fly towards the coming dawn. 

Author's Note

A fanfiction poem written from the POV of Christine Daae to her Angel of Music. INspired by bensara91513 on Fanfiction.net. Thank you for your wonderful stories. I hope you guys enjoyed this one, and have an awesome day!
<3 Elisa

Reviews

[Karen Raquepo]

Sweet and calm! Great work!

[Elisa]

Thank you!

[Mayank]

Had this classic song feeling when I read that, beautiful work.

[Elisa]

Thank you! I had "Music of the Night" playing in my head when I wrote this :D

[613]

Nicely done. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

- Brittney

[Elisa]

Thanks so much Brittney!

[613]

Sure thing!

[E G TEN]

Very nicely written Miss Elisa, I can feel the contemporary flow
In each if your words " thanks for sharing this wonderful petals of poem!;)

[Elisa]

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[Emily]

I hope the meaning of it!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Elisa]

Thanks Emily!

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

very nice poem Elisa .loved it

[Elisa]

Thank you Nonu! You're so amazing. Thank you for always supporting me.

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

i will b always with u. when u feel alone jst look at the gaps between ur fingers thats where mine fits.

[Saddam]

Fabulous picturise poem here.
I love them, lovely creation.

[Elisa]

Thank you :)

[AaronFreitas]

What an awesome piece my friend! I will have to check that website out my :)

[Elisa]

Thank you so much :P

[nazia]

This is so calm and peaceful. Loved the serenity that flowed through the piece Elisa :)

[Elisa]

Thanks :D I'm so glad you liked it

[Jeyanthi]

This is beautifully written, along running with the convincing voice.


lovely rose too :D

[Elisa]

Thank you :P