Tick

One...TICK

chasing...TICK

Always chasing...TICK...TICK

Elegant oak , catching my eye...TICK

time keeper , always sublime...

Timing...TICK.

A well worn hand...TICK.

Chasing...TICK

a timekeeper's wish.

TICK..tick

Author's Note

This is a very different style. very abstract,

Reviews

[zaisham9393]

I found this very interesting and unique.
Well written my friend :)!

[EnglishMajor55]

I like abstract poetry - it allows you to interpret the verses in your own way. My interpretation is that everyone is chasing time, while at the same time, losing time. Am I very far off?

Beautifully written...forced me to think ;)*

[Inject Positivity]

Tick tick ticking... Good job Sir.......

[PhillipCalitz12]

thank you very much sir.. did it make at all sense to you.

[Inject Positivity]

Oh it did Sir.....Well done in simple words.....

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Oh it did Sir.....Well done in simple words.....