Galadriel

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

The Dodoistu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and is often about love or humour. It has 26 syllables made of four lines of 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respectively

Galadriel

Poet Lady of Lórien

With reverberating words

A ballet of fine pleasures

Upon readers hearts

© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee

Author's Note

Just my way of saying thanks for the kind reviews .....

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Annette Pisano-Higley

Yes! Galadriel is poetry in motion for sure! Beautiful picture and touching, perfect, pirouette of a poem...Huzza!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Ardra

It made me go Awww... so sweet... and the pic is beautiful which you added...

and this is such a beautiful way to say thank you ... Thank you to you too..... now i will have to find the perfect ballet for this one... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 13, 2017
Last Updated on September 13, 2017

Author

Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom

About

I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..