Obsession

Too much thinking about what one can never obtain … :-(

Obsession

Overwhelming urge

For impossibilities

Erodes sanity

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Tara Marie]

Absolutely, obsession is just as you described. Its crossing the line of sanity. And entering the world of delusion. A very unhealthy way one can be. Nicely put Phil

[LadyCarlos]

Short but impactful. Love it!

[barleygirl]

This is one of your most impactful of the short formats I've read of yours. This is the kind of idea that explodes into a bigger deal once it hits the reader's mind. Your limited syllables are well-crafted to employ the expansion effect which marks a brilliant senryu (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Iam-me]

Short, sweet and powerful emotions. Come flooding to mind on reading this and so very true. Phill, erodes sanity does obsession. Eloquently expressed to perfection my I add. :)

[Just Kim]

but how about insanity? would it be reversed?
Muchly enjoyed the pondering thoughts in my own head.

[sette]

yes that is the truth sometimes there are things which we should not entertain and think about maybe to preserve sanity in the end

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Amazing truth but eroded sanity is sanity...🌹