Melancholy Melody

Melancholy Melody

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Music to smooth out by ….

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Melancholy Melody



Performing the blues

Brings back bygone memories

In bitter sweet notes


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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Repetition of 'b' is a smart way of thinking. Nice poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I especially like the repetition of “b”.
Much enjoyed!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Music can evoke strong emotion from the past. It can transfer you back in time to a particular moment, and with a particular person. You can relive it. That is how powerful music can be. Very nicely expressed Phill, and very relatable.

Chris

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


A topsy-turvey of words here; seemingly blues music but.. surely far more a time lost and remembered for discordance. Few words, resounding message. Plus, you always find subtle graphics to accompany your posts!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

7 Years Ago

Very astute of you to notice the hidden message - as always a smile or two) your way - :-)
emmajoy

7 Years Ago

No point in reviewing if one doesn't read the post first! Smiles exchanged in mid flight.
It truly dissipates the day, and rejuvenates the soul. Wherever would we be without music in our lives? Much enjoyed this, Phil!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes it always does... the blues bring back too many memories

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful use of words. I love to listen to the blues. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the vintage b&w photo dear Phill. Blues transcend time, age, place, all. You are so right, “bitter sweet notes” of a harmonica’s wail bring back memories. Blues are life. Blues are truth. Excellent senryu my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 29, 2018
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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..