Overreached

Dark star ….

Overreached

Check the star you seek

You may fall off your planet

Picking the wrong one

 

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah yes, often we don't even realize we crave the 'wrong star' until we fall off our planets... excellently worded, my friend!

[angel]

Baby, that would constitute quite a fall!
I guess I'm pretty happy with the planet I was assigned to, so I'll just abide. It's safer that way, evidently.

[Crowley]

With my luck it will be Pluto, no one even knows what it is...lol. This is a great short piece full of wisdom. Great work!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reminds me of those commercials for us buying a star for someone.
Maybe they would also fall off the planet with us...
j.

[barleygirl]

This is one of the best short format poems I've read from you lately. I love the way your message is intriguing & thought-provoking. I love the irreverent sassy tone. Such a waste to be hanging out there in space longing for something instead of savoring what we've got! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Najam Us Saher]

Perfect, this has so much depth in it. Loved the wise thoughts.