Whisperings

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

Just whispers on the wind...

Whisperings

Fine prose

Scribed on frosted falling leaves

Glisten sparkling

In dawn’s first visible light

With words

Of genteel true emotions

Drifting eloquently

Just within arms stretch

And upon

Gesticulating winter winds

A spiral

Of intertwining whisperings

From where

I swore I could perceive

Your soft subtle susurrant

Calling out my name

Sentience sensations

Slowly seep into my spirit

A warm-heartedness

Only experienced

When sensing someone special

Has countenanced

A reciprocal respect

Through mutually shared esteem

Written words

Challenging my senses

Ignites imagination

From your creative inspirations

Stimulating emotions

Within inner aspirations

Secret desires

Of being more than friends

© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee

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Einstein Noodle

man! this is a keeper Phil! thanks so much for sharing with us .. the scene is enchanting ... i recall my young pre and teen years in upstate NY where nights under the corner street lamp warmed dreams of love with gentle falling ...huge snow flakes ... admirable use of the poets tools ...wonderful use of the language ... delicately emotive .. i especially thrill to the small whirlwind of snow .. and these lines:
"When sensing someone special
Has countenanced
A reciprocal respect"
how much better can your moment get than to share it with sensing the presence of a love .. really enjoyed reading ... Merry Christmas! :)
E.
ps. the pic stopped me cold .. fantastic with your poem.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

My heartfelt thanks for you humbling review - blessings upon you at this seasonal time … :-) And �.. read more

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Robert Trakofler

Wow the language the cadence the flow your imagery and subject matter are woven spectacularly in this. I love the alliteration, it is magical as is this poem. I'm shelving this one! By god in heaven i hope your desire comes to fruition!

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Many thanks my friend for your kind words - we live in hope (and faith) … :-)

Lanny

Wow! Such a truly generative piece for inspiring reflection about poetry and poetic inspiration. I also loved how you flawlessly crafted your examples of alliteration, not easy to do.

Truly a nice job.

All the best,

Lanny

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you Lanny - your comments are very much appreciated - cheers … :-)

NotUsinganymore

This was a great descriptive poem! it made you feel the cold air!

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7 Years Ago

Thank you my friend - lovely comments - :-)

Cherrie

Mornings frost viewed in a warm embrace. What a moment to capture.

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7 Years Ago

Thank you Cherrie - nice to get a cuddle for Christmas … :-)

Einstein Noodle

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7 Years Ago

My heartfelt thanks for you humbling review - blessings upon you at this seasonal time … :-) And �.. read more

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Added on December 16, 2018
Last Updated on December 16, 2018

Author

Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom

About

I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..