Breaking Point

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

That moment of great strain when something gives way!

Breaking Point

Tongue pounds like a drill

Smashing spirit with deft skill

You splinter my will

© 2019 Phill Oz O'fee

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kentuck14

Phill,
Well put . . . it should be a means of healing souls . . . yet too often used as a weapon!

Posted 6 Years Ago

jacob erin-cilberto

tongues are tools, and when misused can cause utter emotional and mental destruction.
you said it all in your few compact lines.
powerful poem.
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Annette Pisano-Higley

Superb photo, simile, metaphor on-point imagery- Masterful Senryu Phill! Your words, so precise and inspired. Oh Those pounding tongues- they never stop, do they? Well, I’m clicking off the remote control to the tv now, so I win for tonight! Great write my friend. One to save.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on March 27, 2019
Last Updated on March 27, 2019

Author

Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom

About

I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..