We made magic

I remember the day

We had our first walk

All the words you used to say

The way u made me talk

I remember that amazing Wednesday afternoon

The way you smelt and tasted

Just thinking about it makes me want is again soon

But wanting it again will mean the magic is wasted

I still remember the jokes u made

The craziness we made

The love was made

WE MADE MAGIC!

Author's Note

Bare with me this is my first crack at poetry so...poets...don't chew me alive!!

Reviews

[NWC]

Excellent use of rhyming words in poetry. Keep it up.

[Aphy!]

Thank you very much :)

[dan]

Sometimes a simple and short walk can leave a lasting imprint in our psyches, a memory that can cut through the more unpleasant ones in our minds. A very sweet and soft piece of writing! take care...dan

[Aphy!]

Thank you Dan

[Angelique]

Those moments are magical and that is why we need to cherish them and make new ones to remember that are just as magical. This is a great first attempt on a poem and you have a lot of potential

[Aphy!]

That's true Angelique! Thanks for the positive review

[MadalaJose]

Romantic moments, we all want to bottle some of them and shelve them. interesting

[Aphy!]

Yeah hey! Thank you very much hey

[alifeacoustic]

Those moments that are too special to repeat, where everything connects and you never want the walk to end and break the spell. Where the laughs seem to echo in you after the day is gone, are special days indeed.
Great first attempt. keep it up. :)

[Aphy!]

Thanx! And I'l brush up (Or just stick to story writing)... And those words were beautiful