One with the air

Inspiration came from a very sad movie

No one knew what she had

But they knew she had it bad

The rare illness made them mad

But because they couldn't heal her made them sad

Her life long dream was to reach the finish line

After achieving her goal everything would be fine

She set up the perfect table for them to all dine

"How I long to call her mine"

But there just wasn't enough time

She was getting weaker and frail

But she knew it was too early to fail

Her goal was always to fly

Up

Up

Up

High

Fly without a single care

Misuzu was now one with the air

Author's Note

Those who enjoy a classic sad tale ans also watched the anime movie "Air" would really get this. Felt inspired to share my thoughts after watching it...
Feel free to comment and share YOUR opinion as well
Happy reading...

Reviews

[dan]

Aphy, A very emotion-grabbing and poignant write. A loved one with a terminal illness leads to a clock counting down the time left, the one who is ill striving to reach goals that may not be enough time for; when death is reached the goal to fly is attained, the wind carrying the goals freely and proud. A very nicely done work! take care...dan

[Aphy!]

Thank u so much Dan! Really appreciate it. Take care

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting tale. I liked the energy and the positive feel of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aphy!]

Thank you for those kind words. Glad you liked it!

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Shadowkai]

That was very sad and yet inspirational, I will definitely have to check out that movie, I also love how you rhymed almost every line, I found it kinda catchy lol idk :)
Keep writing Aphy :)
With love
Shadowkai

[Aphy!]

Thanks again, and I'll never stop. There's A LOT I haven't unleashed...you just wait my friend. Thanks for reading :)

[Bluefire]

Oooh, that's on my anime list. This reminded me of Yuuki from Sword Art Online II, it also made me think of Ayase from Guilty Crown.
I like the story, it's lovely as the sky.
Well done!

[Aphy!]

Thank you very much! And i hope the blue didn't make it difficult to read (It's a bit bright)

[Bluefire]

Not to me, no. I think it's quite bold that you chose that color, I always chicken out because I don't think people can see it right before I publish it. I could see this one just fine. You're welcome

[Aphy!]

Guess I'm brave now hey! And I have a confession...I didn't really pick the blue! *hides*
My laptop glitched and I just saw it like that. But I guess it's a sign

[Bluefire]

Lol everything happens for a reason

[Angelique]

I have never seen the movie, but your poem tells the story in your very own way. Beautifully done

[Aphy!]

Thanx, tried putting it in my own words because it would've seemed a bit weird to do it exactly like the movie. But thanx hey, glad u liked it

[HippieSoulPunx]

Very bittersweet. A dream so deeply held that it seems like even the constraints of your illness can't possibly stop you; that, like in the movies, everything will work out. But the illness, and life itself, carries on, and in the end, you don't live long enough to realise your dream in life, but in death you're flying finally. I haven't seen the movie so this probably isn't the plot, but strictly as a poem, that's how it feels to me. Beautifully done.

[Aphy!]

I didn't really go according to the actual plot because I wanted to use my own words and emotions. But thank u for the review and I highly recommend u watch the movie because it's amazing!!

[B. Boileau]

I haven't seen the movie, but I get it. Your owrds discribe perfectly a sad tale of passing.
except for the color (which made it a little hard for an old man like me to read)... Well done

[Aphy!]

Sorry about that my computer glitches and I guess it chose to use this very bright blue which I also cannot read. The movie is really nice u should watch it. Thanx for the review hey