It was only just a dream

When the love just runs out...the everything automatically makes sense!

Maybe my heart didn't really skip a beat, 

and maybe the twinkle in your eye was just the Sun reflecting weird, 

and maybe the feeling in my stomach was just not having enough for breakfast. 

And maybe I just thought it was love...

Author's Note

Not ur average poem...no rhyme scheme...just sharing my thoughts!

Reviews

[Bear]

I remember my mother telling my little sister when she was seven years old that the butterflies fluttering in her stomach wasn't love, Ha! Ha! Thank you for bringing that memory back to life for me, and thank you for posting so we all can enjoy it, well done my new friend :~)
About your title, in the way you are using ONLY and JUST they mean the same thing so you should use only one (It was only a dream or It was just a dream)

[Aphy!]

I'm glad you enjoyed reading hey. And honestly I had a hard time with the title because I felt like it was a bit too short. But...point taken, I was actually thinking about the song "it was only just a dream" and just went with it!

But anyway, thanx for the feedback
take care

[Amy R]

it isn't always about the rhymes :)
loved it!
thanks for sharing :)
-Amy

[Aphy!]

Yeah true, thanks for reviewing

[Amy R]

ur welcome!!!

[B. Boileau]

Poetry isn't about rhymes my friend. What you've penned a perfict narrative of that strange emotion called love.

Well done !
Bill

[Aphy!]

As time goes by and my pieces improve I've learnt that hey. And thank you for taking your time to read. Hope u enjoyed it