Opposite Love

When loving someone hurts so bad...and you still can't help but still love them unconditionally...

OPPOSITE LOVE...

I hate how much I love u

I hate how much I can't get over you

I hate the feelings I have for you

I hate the butterflies I get when I'm with you

I hate how I smile whenever I hear your name

I hate not being with you

I hate being away from you

I hate how you make me smile

Whenever I'm down

I hate that you know me

Better than I know myself

I hate how awkward you make me feel

I hate it when you think I'm ignoring you

I hate how you tease me because I'm short

Or that I do/say weird things

I hate how you take things from me

My money, my heart, my soul, my happiness, my tears

I hate that you'll never truly understand

My feelings for you

How they mess me up

How they make me cry

I HATE HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU!

Author's Note

In a very twisted web called love. Can't get out. Can't breath. Can't stop crying.

Reviews

[Johnny]

I'd say love like that is worthy of some measure of hate.. better to be happy alone rather than in collective misery... well done Aphy! xoxo

[Aphy!]

Hehe yeah. I kinda hated loving that person at that point. But I've found happiness and acceptance in solitude (Hippie vibes) Thank you for the lovely review hey xx

[MadalaJose]

Nice piece. Looks like it has shares the theme with another poem of yours I just read.

I like the irony of hate and love

[Aphy!]

hehe yeah. The whole contrast between hate and love.
Thanx

[Philip Muls]

You feel powerless because of love. I can relate to that. You capture it in a raw and authentic way. Could you read my story Lovesick.

Well done.

[Aphy!]

Thank you very much for the review and I'll read through your story!

[Cherry On Top]

I feel that all the time! I completely understand it and know the feeling and that's why I like it. This poem is amazing because everyone can relate to their own life. Good job!

[Aphy!]

Thanx alot hey that means a lot! I'm glad u could relate hey and I hope u enjoyed reading.

[Cherry On Top]

I did, I loved it.

[dan]

Fighting the fact that one is in love is probably more common than most would care to admit. Being with someone who treats one badly should be a hint to leave, but sometimes the fear is that being treated badly is better than not having a love at all. A love conundrum, wrapped in a riddle. You write of a delicate question spoken loudly: how much more? Well done. take care...dan

[Aphy!]

Thank you very much Dan. Really appreciated it

[Angelique]

Very nice words and very sad and yet true as well.

I am sure so many people can relate to this poem all about heartache and loss of the one person we loved

[Aphy!]

True hey. Everyone relates with heartbreak and the effect if has on u. Thank you so much for the feedback. Really appreciate it

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. I like the flow of thoughts and the directness of the poetry. Love will test us and make us unhappy. I liked the ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aphy!]

Thank you for your review and taking your time to read about me going on about love! Very touchy subject though hey ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well and you are welcome.

[MandaBear]

Yes!! Great poem!! I can relate to this. I am sure many others can. Great work. Keep it up!

[Aphy!]

Yes true. We all can relate to heartbreaks hey. Thanks for reading. Glad u liked it!

[PoeticChico]

YES!!!!! I think a lot of us can relate to your poem... Love can be so good, yet so deceiving. Oh well!
great poem!

[Aphy!]

Thank you so much. Glad u could relate

[HipsterPrincess17]

This is so true

Another poem that you have written that is relatable!

You did a outstanding job on this Aphy!!!

Keep up the good work

Your friend
lia

[Aphy!]

Thank you very much. Even though some of my stuff is about heartbreak and s**t! But a lot of people can relate

[HipsterPrincess17]

Sadly that's true.


I do wish that heartbreak wasn't so relatable though :(

[Aphy!]

But I guess in the long run...it'll help us all grow. But for now...I'm putting all my tears and frustrations on paper and using it constructively! #Girl_Power