Forever In A Drop Of Blood

Can you see forever ? as it burns within my eyes;
do you dream of endless love ? to hide your deepest cries.
Do you stare out the midnight window ? looking into the abyss;
craving what you cannot find , the thrill of dark love's kiss.

If I told you that I loved you , would you drop on bended knee;
or would you see the pain of truth , and ask I set you free.
I can hold your heart in disarray , for as long as you may choose;
but only you would know the truth , and all that you could ever lose.

So I ask with but a single thought , where truths are like a grain of sand;
tell me what you most desire , ask of me what you demand.
I hold forever in a drop of blood , and you hold fate by me;
so who of us is truly lost ? maybe you will set me free.

Reviews

[Chula]

I love how the words in the poem go smoothly together. I found that the poem was very attention grabbing and extremely interesting to read! I believe that you are a very talented writer!

[Kat]

I love the flow of this, and each line is just beautifully written. From the title to the last line, just awesome work. :)

[easybreezy]

Or would you see the pain of truth and ask I set you free...that line struck me deeply. You've done an excellent job! I love this!

[Phoenix]

thank you so much

[Just Kim]

wow deep and powerful, enjoyed

[Phoenix]

thank u