Unsweet Bed of Sanity

I whisper sweet dreams
into the open air
in hopes it carries them away
from the dream crushing jaws
of my mind's take on reality.

Reviews

[Slithering Angel]

Reality is a b***h-and-a-half. Honestly, I prefer my fevered dreams to realities cold, hard bite. Then again, that might just be MY mind's take on reality as opposed to your own.

[EvilIsRelative]

Reality is too often all-consuming. I loved the poem, but in the last line, minds, should be mind's.

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. am so glad you do ... i think you often take on my "dream crushing jaws" too ... i'll feel freer to dream now :) ... thank you for writing this profound and perceptive and sweet piece of poetry, my friend :) ...

[Pi Cee]

You're very welcome Serah =)