The Dust is Flying

Behind me
into your eyes
blinding your stupid little words
and buying me time
for a better try
at seeing the bright blue sky.

Reviews

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~ ah... beautiful...
~ your spirit shines in these words...

~ i just read an audrey hepburn quote that says:
to plan a garden is to believe in tomorrow

[Pi Cee]

Oh thank you my Serah.
I saw it, it's an intriguing idea.

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~ the last two lines of your poem has that idea in it... that better try, you know... because tomorrow could be better... :)

[Pi Cee]

Brighter and prettier and full of sunshine. =)

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~ yes... yes... and yes... :)

[Steven Cash]

Bravo, real nice, Bri!

[Pi Cee]

Thanks.

[Steven Cash]

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