Come-back

"And some things
leave you standing
with your heart
wrenched out of your chest,
and walk away to make you hold it
writhing in your hand.
Dying now with poison
and you to sink
to blood soaked dust."

Reviews

[Corset]

This is so short but it says everything it needs to say and then some, it's so hard to know the right thing to do sometimes in a given situation that is not longer a healthy place to be especially when love and emotions are so deeply set, sad and gorgeous at the same time, you can really pack a punch in nine lines!

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~ very powerful and poignant poetry... some things do have that heartbreaking effect...