Sorry

Simple. You know I know.

You have to tread carefully with me sometimes
and you don't want me to say sorry.

Sometimes I know you don't know what to say
and you don't want me to say sorry.

Sometimes things don't go as planned
and you don't want me to say sorry.

But you know I know why.



But you also know it's who I sometimes am.

Reviews

[Xanthous Crow]

Apologizing is so droll. And it is hard to differentiate between a damning apology, an insincere apology and a sincere one. It feels like the "you" is walking on eggshells here - but I wonder; why won't they want you to say "sorry"?

The uniformity of the second line is nice and repetitive; it feels like a conversations or confessional. At least to me. Nice write.

[Damien Davison]

I though it was a good write, there is just one part, and don't mind my constructive criticism, the very last line would of been absolutely perfect if you switched "sometimes" and "am", I just think it would flow better. Personal opinion though. Great write otherwise, seriously!