Tug and Pull

It's a tug and pull kind of thing
I hold myself back
you tug for my affection
I little by little give my mind up in little pieces
and then the lack of your tug
pulls me into a deep dark hole
a hole I know you know well

Reviews

[kelvin]

tug and pull as in the state you're waiting for the other to make the first move to see where you're standing but when there's no tug you go to a downward state good expression here keep writing fellow writer

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This makes me think of the old saying, "Don't know what you got till it's gone."

[quinfinn]

this poem wasn't written for me and yet.....you seem to know me so well. i love to read your heart and mind, my friend....very good!