Paint Me Flowers

On our wall.
In a pretty bouquet
of red, black, and white.
That way they won't die,
I'll have them forever,
'til I die
in your arms
staring at the pretty pretty wall.

Reviews

[Avocations of Amber]

This is quaint, but so full of feeling and love. Painted flowers that never die can be equated to a love that remains frozen in time. Beautiful sadness.

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a beautiful tragedy. that bouquet is a forest of feeling.
great job

[Corset]

This is beautiful but it fills me with such sadness, it feels like the wall has been decorated with a bouquet of love and flowers but it feels like it's actually a partition, it comes in between.

[Wolfwind]

One foot forward, one rose blossoming in the heart, another step forward, a second rose's scent forever in the soul. The next step, the next dozen plus one, forever to embrace the life grown steadily within vine made for two. =)

Aaron =)

[Invisible]

how's about that? :)

[quinfinn]

beautifully simplistic and simply beautiful!

[Pi Cee]

Thanks quin =)