It's Late

Can I show you my tears,
can these letters...
Can they fall?
Can I show you how they leak and drip and drop to the floor?

They crash like glass,
break and melt.

They're so cold
so warm.
Memories,
thoughts,
wants,
broken dreams.

Reviews

[Neon]

I hate when someone as glamours as you 'Cry' ... So, please don't cry. No .. I don't wanna see you cry but happy. This poem's came from your inside the depth of your flowery heart. I do hate those too who make angels cry .. fill their eyes with tears. May be they don't know that what they do is not so good because these're not tears they bring but the 'Diamonds' they pluck from the eyes and which's not so good because it's a right of angels to shine like 'The Diamonds' ...

... I think you wrote this poem when you were in depression and were crying at all. Anyway, don't cry .. don't show to anyone your tears because no one deserve to see them coz .. Diamonds're very expensive and there're very few people who deserve to touch them with the smoothness of their hands. Smile always brings happiness to everyone .. so, Be happy .. after all, I love seeing angels happy and smiley :)

[Chris]

You hadn't been by - so I came looking.

There's a lot behind our smiles...

take care Bri...

[kink]

Something short and nice to read. you are telling about your tears but the title is saying somthing different..little odd :)

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

Not sure what to make of this... Seems like a cry out to a lost lover if i'm reading it right? Made me think if they didn't stick around, then are they really worth crying over? Nice imagery!

[Pi Cee]

Not necessarily a lover, though it certainly could be. Thanks for the review.

[K-mo]

short and sweet and filled with a lot of raw emotion! Lovely write!

[quinfinn]

you have shown the tears with this beautiful write.