Leaves

They flash by like pages
in a book that
reads for you

If you could stop
and hold just one
you'd look at its creases
you'd wonder about its day
and maybe realize
something new

about you
and the pages
of every book
that has to read for you

Reviews

[Neon]

I loved the rhythm you hold makin' this coolio write.

Everyday .. we do wake up and start off the day to bring something what we even don't know .. but something good to make a future bright. Past's what an enemy of future and present is what a frnd of future .. in the present we make oneself get lost into past (in old memories) sometimes and sometimes we do worry about future to think how it'd be if we do this or that .. and we live all the time in worries .. and if we do follow your words you penned into the write (beautiful write) then we'll learn how to live happily in present without carrying of past and without worrying about future...

... It's one of the best write of yours to me. Thanks for penning this amazing write.

[T. Val]

You kept it short and sweet, I can actually imagine myself catching a leaf in mid air and examining it's beauty. Just looking at it and thinking and wondering. A beautiful piece.

[Trigorin]

Not bad. This piece is well written and you say what you mean to, obviously, but it just seems rather bland to me, to be frank. I'm not sure entirely what the problem is, but I think a part of it lies with your rather uniform word choice. It just all seems to run together.

[Dr. Wood ?]

life is a book with no end........Hopefully

[Pi Cee]

Eventually an end will come, but at least the individual end to most individuals leaves in the still open book words and pictures worthy to be seen.

[Dr. Wood ?]

we are writing a classic between us.......