Hopeful Us

 

Whisper to me

our story of love

so so very far from any kind of fairy tale

 

Whisper to me

of us

and our future

and our future's past

 

Whisper to me

of the stars

in our eyes

and of the growing ache

to keep each other alive

 

Reviews

[Neon]

I liked the title... and it's a very nice poem in the clear & simple words. Beautiful work.

[Inspiring Writer]

Nice write you made, I liked the words that whispered in this write. Last stanza's nicely penned. Keep writing.

[Invisible]

love or the idea of it has that effect on some people.

[Chris]

some days the rain doesn't even leave rainbows behind...

[Pi Cee]

Maybe not, but the sun always reappears, does it not?

[Chris]

if we let it... cause you still have to open your eyes to see

[Pi Cee]

Are you letting the sun shine for you Chris?

[Chris]

some days I don't know... and some days I do.