Napkin Note (2)

You're feelings
that become mine
through your verse

My love,
you give to me the breath
that pumps my lungs
and for my heart provides
the beat that pounds for you to hear
just so.

For my own words
are only but a glow given
by the dust of your starry self.

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

This was fine, smooth, warm like a fresh brewed sweet mocha. I loved how it sweeps the soul into the night sky and holds it, transcending existence, to live and dance within the resonance of starry nights and the love their glistening tails hold.

The middle stanza is wonderful, for it melts the essence of a close born kiss into an amazing vision of analogies. I am truly blessed to have gazed up these finely crafted words of yours.

Many thanks for taking time to spin them just right! =)

Aaron - Wolfwind