Flowing Hope

A stream of hope emptying in a delta
Of shards of broken hearts long ago shattered
Just before they can get washed away into a sea, ocean, of
Wondering thoughts
With washed out sparks of ideas and dreams forgotten
Floating tufts of hopeful clouds
Trying to find a better day,
A brighter day where a blue lights the sky
They so urgently reach for
A mix of darkness and the hope of light
surround this flowing careful stream of hope

Reviews

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this is amazingly vivid writing
i know how that feels

[Jupiter Jazz]

That was interesting. I really like the first 2 lines