Standing on the Shore

There are so many oceans
ones of Possibility
Optimism
'Other Fish'
Masks
Fine Cover-ups
Choices
Chances
Thoughts
And here you all are sailing and diving and dipping
while I'm still standing on the shore.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

You forgot that we are in fact dipping into the waters of your words as you dance upon the shore penning in the sand with each step of your feet. Never fear to paddle a little and let the waves of inspiration break over you. Love the poem, keep em' coming

[Wolfwind]

Sometimes standing on the shore gains one added perspective on the vast see's of chaos swirling in the waves. While it can be to quiet at times with the feet in the sand, sometimes it's just what the doctor ordered.
I see the piece as a flow of thoughts against those who seem to act to blindly in life, always getting themselves into situations they would rather not.

Ink to make one Think.
Aaron

[dan nacario]

great poem...