I've Been Living With Secrets

I've been living alone drowned in my secrets

saving people from my black whole

covering up tears and cracks leaking from this hard chinking armor

 

I've been living lost webbing lie after lie

twining an intricate scuplture from weak shattered words

faking a strong hold and losing to shadows covering the facade

 

 

Reviews

[EMF]

A stark, lonley piece that cries with each line. Some secrets in life are essential for sanity, others must be revealed. The premise of your work. But you phrase things with great clarity and expression

[dukovan]

. You havea nice way of phrasing things, and use good techniques,

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

the flow and structure of this piece were awesome and the wording was what pulled it all together